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Amira
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Posted: Mar 23rd, 2006 04:02 PM |
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The needle fell there
No one hears it hit the floor
The bare foot finds it
Last edited on Mar 23rd, 2006 04:07 PM by Amira
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insatiableus
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Posted: Mar 23rd, 2006 04:30 PM |
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| OUCH! I just love this form of poetry. Thanks for sharing.
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Posted: Mar 23rd, 2006 05:42 PM |
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| I didnt think we had any Haiku writers in the house....nice thought in motion continue...
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Amira
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Posted: Mar 27th, 2006 08:40 PM |
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Thank you  I'm more of a reader then a writer
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eboni_goddess
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Posted: Apr 10th, 2006 02:56 PM |
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| Reader you may be; but this was a very nice piece....
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Posted: Apr 30th, 2006 04:51 AM |
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| hahaha...painful playful poetry
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Posted: May 10th, 2006 07:07 PM |
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indeed a nice flow...u need to share more wif the fam....
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Amira
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Posted: May 10th, 2006 08:13 PM |
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thank you Ebonic, Ill and Drizzle slowly getting there Last edited on May 10th, 2006 08:49 PM by Amira
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Posted: May 19th, 2006 03:55 AM |
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| more please!!!
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Posted: Jan 6th, 2007 07:06 AM |
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| This is one of my favorites so I just had to bring it back to the top to share.
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Posted: Jan 6th, 2007 04:13 PM |
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"OUCH" WOULD BE AN UNDERSTATEMENT TO SOME. WHAT COULD FOLLOW ARE CHOICE WORDS AS IF IT WERE A SAILOR. I KNOW BECASUE I USED TO BE ONE....LOL
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LegacyLeonard
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Posted: Jul 17th, 2007 09:23 PM |
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Ouch indeed....it's almost a metaphor on life.
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bossidler
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Posted: Aug 7th, 2007 09:14 PM |
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| nice haiku....a friend of mine had his whole foot swollen from a fallen needle, this is so true we should pay attention to find it when it falls.
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