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vizhenz
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Posted: Dec 27th, 2005 04:05 PM |
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The feeling of the once
thought we shared is gone
For it enter in my life
and beheld my heart
Leaving in which became bitter
To long for the feeling is gone
For it who enter in does not feel
For if it did it could feel
The pain it brought
From the day it walk in to my life
And awaken my soul
(c) 2003
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Hellothere
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Posted: Dec 28th, 2005 06:33 AM |
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| WOW!!!! The 1st two lines ring so clear and dear to my heart. Nice flow!
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Caramelpython
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Posted: Jan 31st, 2006 07:00 AM |
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| ouch I felt ya pain. good job!
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Posted: Mar 5th, 2006 07:42 PM |
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| ditto! that hit home with me too. took me back in time a lil.
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Posted: Mar 6th, 2006 03:07 AM |
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| Are you peaking in my diary again? very nicely done!
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Posted: Jun 1st, 2006 05:29 AM |
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Feeling shared , taken
stumbling in a maze
where only love abids
yet lost souls and forsaken
i still hold it , yet one
may never know as it
abandon my life forever .
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