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rwinte82
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 Posted: Sep 6th, 2008 08:01 PM

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Shadows on the wall ~ whisper
words the masses don't comprehend.
Announcing to the aware:
time to take cover!

Shadows on the wall ~ moan
in muted tones grief the uncomprehending don't fathom
Grieving for what was meant to be
but was stolen from the people.

Shadows on the wall ~ sigh
silently to themselves.
Words only they can comprehend
and the aware vaguely understand.

Shadows on the wall ~ wish to shout
but realize it is hopeless.
The nation is finished as a republic or democracy
and will never rise again.


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 Posted: Dec 6th, 2008 01:24 PM

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this hea is an interesting write.

filled with experssions to ponder...

i will have to come and reread again.

thanks for sharing.



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 Posted: Dec 6th, 2008 03:18 PM

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I love this....profound



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 Posted: Dec 6th, 2008 06:55 PM

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Thank you for your comments :D


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 Posted: Dec 8th, 2008 10:25 PM

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Thank you for sharing this piece and seeing what so many cannot. There are truly many shadows.



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