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bossidler
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Posted: Oct 6th, 2007 09:41 PM |
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like an Amish
we thought our safe net
was safe from the destructive fing-r grip
of the enemies reach which we dog the bounty hunter seek
One of the greatest country lost hide and go seek to a camel jockey
and his bandana gansters
Now we stay home and morn the morman's secret
of retricting town hall meetings only to those we treat trustworthy
Berth will no longer attend school
because his mom's potato cart
cannot leave the parameters of the village circle
Bush didn't give condolense
to the one room school house of girls killed
in execution thrill, with shots in the back and the head,
arms apart confession-less of their sins.
someone pray for their chances to heaven,
lets pray we all serve the same
almighty Deity's deviness.
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vizhenz
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Posted: Nov 8th, 2007 03:33 PM |
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diggin the drop
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manasia
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Posted: Feb 25th, 2008 03:27 AM |
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This is a nice rhyme, I like the juxtaposition with the super power vs the bandana gangasters thats was up.
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Bishop
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Posted: Feb 25th, 2008 04:59 AM |
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Posted: Feb 25th, 2008 09:51 PM |
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Posted: Mar 15th, 2008 05:48 PM |
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One of the greatest country lost hide and go seek to a camel jockey
and his bandana gansters
digg'd the wordplay of this drop, especially the line above....
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